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Daily Deviation
Given 2012-06-03
Jade by *pikaole. A delectable color scheme paired with a wonderfully whimsical style. Please be sure to check out the rest of this artist's gorgeous, playful gallery! (
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Congratulations on the Daily Deviation; it is much deserved. When I saw this piece, it immediately caught my eye and I knew that I had to look further into this piece.
Strengths: The style is just adorable. I love the flowing feel of this piece and I just adore the various cool colors and warm colors mingling together. Such factors make this piece feel natural and one with nature.
I also enjoy the exotic feel of this piece as well, such as the girl's apparel, for example. It feels as if I already know that she lives in a tropical climate not just judging on HOW her apparel appears but how it is also decorated as well. I really love the mix of angular and animated patterns.
Suggestions: I really do not find anything wrong with this piece but I do have a kind suggestion: I really love the contrasting colors here in this piece (warm and cool colors) and I thought that the aquatic life at the bottom of the piece would have been enhanced if some of their scales were said warm colors. Not all of the scales but only a couple on each fish. But this is only what I believe.
Overall, this piece is just beautiful. Keep up the good work. Beautiful style and such a wonderful vision.
It seems like everything does flow nicely, but what about the small little flowers behind her? Isn't she supposed to be underwater? Shouldn't there be more sand then flowers? The bird is beautiful, but I feel he should blend more with the background and that would make the girl burst out and look more eye-popping. I think the detail is wonderful, and well, magical. Her hair blending in and turning into the theme of water and waves is a wonderful choice. Just make sure it doesn't blend in too much or it would off-set this completely. This is really a wonderful work. I love the big flower behind her and her billowing pants. They are the most woderful aspects to the artwork.
I've added many of your images to my favourites but never commented on them! This is great, I love how you've achieved this very personal style, the arabesque and saturated colours, the stylised characters and BEAUTIFUL fish and birds I just love it!
Strengths: The style is just adorable. I love the flowing feel of this piece and I just adore the various cool colors and warm colors mingling together. Such factors make this piece feel natural and one with nature.
I also enjoy the exotic feel of this piece as well, such as the girl's apparel, for example. It feels as if I already know that she lives in a tropical climate not just judging on HOW her apparel appears but how it is also decorated as well. I really love the mix of angular and animated patterns.
Suggestions: I really do not find anything wrong with this piece but I do have a kind suggestion: I really love the contrasting colors here in this piece (warm and cool colors) and I thought that the aquatic life at the bottom of the piece would have been enhanced if some of their scales were said warm colors. Not all of the scales but only a couple on each fish. But this is only what I believe.
Overall, this piece is just beautiful. Keep up the good work. Beautiful style and such a wonderful vision.
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