Daily Deviation
Given 2011-08-19
Boy and girl by *
pikaole.
The Suggester said: "the moment i saw this piece it just blow me away , really amazing with the color and really stunning . The artist herself have super amazing gallery ,everyone should check it". (
Suggested by ~supperfrogg and Featured by
`Atramina )
The female's feet are way too close to the edge of the picture plain. Just bump her over to the left to give her more room and it should be fine.
When I first look at this drawing, my eyes get stuck on the girl's face. I think this is because this is the area with the most contrast. Her eyes are so dark in comparison to her face. Although this is a good thing...I sort of get stuck there. I think if you darkened a few more things in the picture, it would help guide the eye around other areas of the composition. Maybe the bushes behind the figure on the left to being him out more? Hope this helps!
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